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Thursday, 17 March 2016

Descriptive Writing

WALT: write a description.


My Favourite Person  

My Favourite person is my Teacher Mr Nath because he is kind and he always help us with our learning . When we are stuck he comes and helps us.

He is a helpful man. When we  go for our assessments, he   encourages us to work hard.  He also supports us when we can not read certain words  by sounding out the words for us.  Mr. Nath  is  a hard working man.  

We have 23 students  in our class and he always encourages us with our learning.  He is the best teacher we have and the only male teacher in our school. He  works hard for all of us. When he comes to school he tellś us that he had been thinking about us.

He also has really kind attitude for all students. Mr. Nath is also really brilliant at  Maths and all other subjects. He always makes his way to school just for us everyday because he is so enthusiastic about teaching.  

I feel very happy when Mr. Nath is in school because I know that he is there for me and all of us and he will help us all with our learning.


By Litia



10 comments:

  1. Thank you Litia for having so much confidence in me as your teacher. I guess I have been blessed to have so many students like you who have contributed towards making work very interesting and challenging.

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  2. I would kindly like to say to you litia well done hope you can keep it up

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    1. Well Thank you Mr Nath For Commenting on my Blog. Thank you for also supporting room 8 as well.

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    1. I love the way you picked Mr Nath as your favourite person. It is really cool how you wrote about Mr Nath. There is 24 students now but that's okay. I really like the way you have described Mr Nath in ways that are positive. Thank you for writing this it really inspired me.

      Thank you
      Cherise

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  5. I can relate why you have written about Mr Nath, because yes he is a very kind and helpful teacher. You have put a lot of effort into this writing keep it up.

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  6. Thank you Alisi for believing in me and I really hoped you can keep it up on your Blog as well.

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  7. I really liked the way you put a lot of describing words in your writing. This was a fantastic descriptive writing about your favourite person and I am very exited to read your next story. KEEP IT UP!

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  8. I really liked the way you put a lot of describing words in your writing. This was a fantastic descriptive writing about your favourite person and I am very exited to read your next story. KEEP IT UP!

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