By Ana and Alyanna
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Kia ora Ana and Alyanna
ReplyDeleteI'm Ebony from Awapuni school Gisborne
I really like the colours and detail you put into this drawing. Maybe you could of put some shading in it so it would stand out a little more but it's still really cool :).
Hi my name is baxtor from awapuni school in gisborn. Wow you knocked my socks of with those cool poly lined hands. When i read your post i learnt to stay positive. Next time you can add more detail.
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ReplyDeleteHello Anna and Alyanna. My name is Toby from Awapuni School Gisborne. I really liked your post because it was really inspirational and it made me feel good. Of this blog post I learnt a new word, optimistic. Which means to expect the best of something. Maybe next time you could add a little bit more detail into the polyline because Hands don't really have straight lines, there all curved. Have you thought about adding more words onto the page? I think that it would be really good so then you can get more information and more people may see it. From Toby .
ReplyDeleteHello, my name is Curtis from (as you probably guessed) Awapuni school in Gisborne. Man you guys are so talented with your poly lines and all your amazing information you added about bouncing back. You taught me what the importance of being positive, Keep it up Ana and Alyanna!
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kayla and I go to Awapuni school and I really like your background.my favorite part is when you said be who you are.
Hello Anna and Alyanna.My name is Krisharn from Awapuni School.I like your polylineing you did to create the hands that created a love heart!also i like how you also added some sentences at the botton of your polylineing of the heart.mabey next time add a little bit more things around the polylineing you create.From Krisharn
ReplyDeleteHi my name is WILLIAM and I am from awapunin school and I enjoyed the part when
ReplyDeleteyou did your backrand and when you did your really cool witting
the faces you have used are really good like so good.
it really helps story
Kia ora Ana & Alyanna i’m Aria from Awapuni school from Gisborne. i really like the way you have information about following your dreams and positive mind give a positive life did you think of putting stem’s maybe next time you could put more detail and a bit more colour
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ReplyDeleteI'm Addison from Awapuni School Gisborne.
I really like how you put a lot of detail and lots of positive things about life.
I have learnt that I should have a positive mind and always follow my dreams.
Next time you could put some more phrases to make people feel good.
KIA oar my name is Seth and I go to Awapuni school and I really like your blog post and your polyline is perfect and that is good advice to follow my own dream and in the future you could add more information or more describing words. bye (:
ReplyDeletekia ora Ana and Alyanna
ReplyDeleteI'm Tyran from Awapuni school Gisborne I like you poliline and also like how you gave it a try on you poly line and also you can work on adding more information on a text and add more explanation.
Keep up the great work!
From Tyran
Dear Ana & Alyanna,
ReplyDeleteI really like all the color you have added to your drawing
maybe next time you could add more bracelets on the persons hands
From Ngaire
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ReplyDeleteHello my name is Meekah and I go to Awapuni School. I liked the background that you used. I learnt that it is important to be yourself.
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Hello Anna and Alyanna. My name is Te Aroha and i go to Awapuni I like how you did the postive heart you are so thoughtful you have put a lote of work I really like how you said folly your dreams but maybe next time put a pit aroundhe polylineing you create.From Te Aroha
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ReplyDeleteKia ora rm 10
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part of your Picture is when you did the polylines on the heads.
when I read your post I learnt how to have a positive mind to Grand life to me.
bye rm 10
from mahanga c
Hi Ana and Alyanna
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lucas N and I go to Awapuni school What I like about your online art is that your background stands out good but one thing you might need to work on is to change your polyline because hands don't really have lines
Kia ora Ana and Alyanna
ReplyDeleteI'm Mercedes from Awapuni School Gisborne
I really like the part when you use the poly line hands to make a shape of a heart, it gives me a memory of the sunset beside the ocean,Maybe next time you can add more words with positive thoughtful helpful.
Hi Ana and Alyanna
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lochie and I go to Awapuni School in Gisborne New Zealand. I like how you said that if you have a positive mind you have a positive life. I might try that? Next time could you make the bottom words more colourful.
you need some full stops on your work.:D :) (:
Deletehi room 10 I really like your blog posts and take inspiration and think your message is important and thank you.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ana Alyanna.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Passion and I go to Awapuni school Gisborne.I like your backround because it looks very nice
Kia ora Glenbrae school, My name is Grace and I go to Paroa school. This poster is really cool and has heaps of colourful colours and looks really cool. I also love how you guys have created this by hand with the polyline. How long did it take to make? Maybe next time you could add a few more ways to be positive.
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hi Ana and Alyanna I thought it was very cool and I liked it a lot. But maybe next time you could add more detail.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Holly, I go to Paroa school greymouth.
I really liked this post because of the creativity and amount of work that must of gone into this.
Next time when you put words over a sun you may want to make it a bit more readable by making the lettering a darker color.
Other than that this post is amazing and I love it!
cool
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ReplyDeleteGood job
DeleteHI! This is a great DLO but how does the DLO connect to the topic without the words. BUT GREAT JOB :D
ReplyDeleteHi Room 10. This is the best DLO I've seen today. Great job and Keep blogging.
ReplyDeleteBYE:)
Hi Alyanna ... This is awesome! So true, great inspiration!
ReplyDeletewow ana and alyana you guys are really good at making your poster look really cool, you are some creative girls, have a good day and stay optimistic,\
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Viliami
Wow! This is a great poster and has an awesome message. Stay safe and keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteMiss Smith.
Kia Orana Ana & Alyanna
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong message from you both! Keep up the awesome work👌
Talofa lava My name Lini. Nice positive mind you got there . keep it up girls
ReplyDeleteKia Orana Ana&Alyanna
ReplyDeleteyou did a great job by staying positive.keep up the good job and be safe.
good work Anna and Alyanna I really like how you do your background keep it up you two!!!.
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