Clubs
Yesterday we had clubs. I am in Mr Nath’s club which is drumming. Yesterday we practised a four and five beat. Then we made a cool rhythm together. The next time we do clubs we are going to practise a 6,7 and 8 beat and that’s what we did yesterday at clubs.
By Ezekiel
Hi Ezekiel, hopefully you can show us your drumming next time PwC come visit!
ReplyDeleteHi Ezekiel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Grace and I am a yr 7 student from Tamaki Primary School. I really enjoy reading your work! Maybe next time you could proofread your sentences so it make sense and maybe you could add a bit more information like for example what you enjoy about it? And what you found challenging?
Other than that you did a GREAT JOB!
:) Grace
Kia ora my name WallyMei I go to Tamaki Primary and I just want to say that this is some good piece of writing.Next time you can try to make your writing a bit longer.Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteWow Ezekiel! Nice recount about clubs. I enjoyed it a lot because it had very simple details and I could use this type of writing skills one day. Keep on writing!
ReplyDeleteKind regards ~ Anastacia F.