Today Ana M shared her writing on the topic "Should we wear school uniforms?". This is what she wrote.
Should we wear uniforms to school?
There are numerous benefits to wearing school uniforms. They encourage a sense of
belonging and school spirit.
By wearing the same uniform, new students will feel more included and comfortable
around their peers. Another benefit of wearing uniforms is that students will be less likely
to compare themselves to others.
Wearing uniforms will help build a sense of unity within the school. Wearing uniforms will
help free students of the stress of what to wear in the morning to school.
Wearing school uniforms will help improve student inventions and improve themselves
first. Wearing matching uniforms can make students feel equal.
By Ana M
Kia ora Ana M, you have stated some very valuable arguments in your writing. I do agree with all of them. I also think it has an economic value because if you have a uniform, you only wear your school uniform to school and save your other good clothes for special occasions :). Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletePS: some Room 7 students in the past have written about this topic too. Let me know if you want me to send you their argument writing so you can have a read.
I would love to read them mrs tofa
DeleteI agree with you Ana with all the points you have mention above and that is so true. You are sharing it and I hope others will feel the same and understand why they are wearing school uniform. Keep up posting what you've been learning Ana.
ReplyDeletethank u miss pau'uvale
DeleteHello Glenbrae my name is Ebony and I am from Paihia School. I love the writing, of the debate whether you should wear uniforms or not. As you have stated many things such as no one is comparing themselves to other people, or when students are new they can feel more included and comfortable, if you could choose would you choose for your school to have uniforms?
ReplyDeletethank you
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