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Well done Paisha. I like your poem because you have told us about some of the things you would like to have in your dream garden. Keep up with your good work Paisha.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your narrative poem. I like how descriptive you are with what you envision in your garden. I especially like how you have a secret area just for you to play. Keep up the awesome work, Paisha!!
-Miss Tavioni
Kia ora Paisha , I am Casper from Ahipara school. Your dream garden sounds really amazing and cool and interesting and the concept sounds really cool. Maybe next time maybe make your poem a haiku. Anyway keep up the good work and blog ya later!!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Paisha,
ReplyDeleteIt's Hunter here from Ahipara school. I think your dream garden is pretty cool, and looks likes a good garden. Maybe next time you could add a reflection. Ka pai.
Hi Paisha, I am Alice from Ahipara School. I love your poem. The garden sounds really cool. Maybe next time you could put your words in a stand out colour so it could read it easier. Keep up the good Work. Blog you later!!! :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Paisha, what a lovely narrative poem you have here. Well done keep up the great mahi.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Room 10, my name is Angela and I am a year 8 student who attends Paihia School. I like your post about your dream garden because it paints a dreamy picture in my head. I also like your poem because it is very interesting and descriptive. What is your favourite bird?
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Hi Paisha, my name is Mark and I am a senior student at Paihia School. I like your post about your dream garden because it draws a fanciful picture in my head. I also like how you wrote your poem because the poem you wrote was very revealing.
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Kia ora Paisha,
ReplyDeleteIt's Hunter T-J here from Ahipara school. I think your dream garden is pretty cool, and looks likes a good garden. Maybe next time you could make the writing darker. Ka pai. Blog Ya Later.
Ki ora Peisha well done for your Garden i like the way you ppuit the tittle and also using those words. Keep it up and never give up ok. From Mrs Tukuafu.
ReplyDeleteHello Paisha, I love this narrative poem you have here, It expresses a lot of emotions. I love the way you made the reader (me) feel as if I'd want to visit this garden as it states in your poem it's a peaceful place!
ReplyDeleteGreat Work Paisha!
Uinita
Kia ora Paisha,
ReplyDeleteIt's Hunter T-J here from Ahipara school. I think your dream garden is pretty cool, and looks likes a good garden. Maybe next time you could make the writing darker. Good work Paisha. Blog ya later.
hi paisha well done and keep up the great work paisha
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