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Friday, 3 May 2019
ANZAC Poem
Agonising world war Never ending Zooming pass them, a bullet, a bomb, a fighter plane Australian and New Zealand soldiers fighting in WW 1 Ceremonies all around the country every 25th of April to remember all those people who died.
Well done Pitara. You have really put in a lot of thoughts in writing this poem. I liked the line that describes the bullets, bombs and planes. Keep up with your good work.
Well done Pitara. You have really put in a lot of thoughts in writing this poem. I liked the line that describes the bullets, bombs and planes. Keep up with your good work.
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ReplyDeletegreat work it really paints a picture in your head maybe you could write about the word
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